Monday, May 30, 2011

Jodi Harte

This is a very short poem I did for Lenka Sweet.
[I don't think I'm a poet, but I'll still try, anyway]
I hope you like it, Lenka!!!! :]



Well let me tell you from the start,
Of this young girl named Jodi Harte!

An elemental was her mum.
Her dad a con, he was not dumb.

To them this black haired babe was born.
In her hair, rainbow clips adorned,

Each to her their trade they did teach
These, from them, she sucked like a leach

But to her parents the Reaper came.
Poor sweet Jodi was never the same.

To her is spoken, "Everyone dies."
She glares him down with her ocean blue eyes!

By their gravestones she stands today.
Jodi hopes at rest they lay.

Alas, she cannot linger, for
She must begone and stay no more.

A bit excited she walks away.
Genius cons she has planned this day!

Many a-thing she does have to do,
And at some point, she plans to con you!

9 comments:

  1. I didn't tell you I think this is great! I think this is great!

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  2. AWESOME-SAUCE POWAH!!!!
    This was exceptionally well-written.
    You should really write more poems. The ones so far are REALLY good.

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  3. I've started a fanfiction!

    Please read!

    http://fanficoffire.blogspot.com/2011/06/sfd-part-1.html

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  4. Thanks so much for the feedback Skyril!! In answer to your question, i am yet to write more, however, I have it sorta planned out *plucks idea from thin air* I HAVE GOT IT!!! BTW look out latest post for the Waffle Creed of June!!!!!!
    I <3 WAFFLES!!!

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  5. WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT! This is INCREDIBLE!
    What do you mean you are no poet! It's so obvious you ARE!
    I love it Skyril. Fantastic job!

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  6. I liked the last line :) Great work, overall it was stunning :D

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  7. lol, Kal, well... maybe I'm becoming one :D


    Thanks, Hellboy! :D

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